Sunday, 22 September 2013

EDITING CHECKING- Check for the following

1. PREP (Preposition)
When you buy anything, you to need to take a good at it before buying. After you buy it, it is more difficult to change it. you may have to get in line for customer service.
2.AVA (Subject- Verb Agereement)
At customer service, everyone stands in line, wastes time, looks around, carry damaged goods, or mutters their complaints. Trying to get stupid refunds is my least favourite activity.
3. CS (Comma Splice)
Rudennss does not get you anywhere. It just digs you a deeper hole. keep courteous. Always  take the high road. Remember the rule: customor is kig.
4. FRAG (Fragment)
Polite salespeaple, knowlegeable trainer, committed customers in the store.
Sure, there may be a few difficult situation once in a while
Dealing with unreaonable caller, seems like an exercise in futility.

Monday, 9 September 2013

Vacation

Last weekend my husband and I went to the Thousand Islands. I had not seen it before. But my husband had seen it once.
We went there with Rahtoz Tours, which we met near the Finch Station at 8:00 o'clock.
After two hours we arrived at the Big Apple Restaurant and ate a very delicious breakfast. There was a factory that made apple pie. On the way a man played on a accordion and sung. It was so good.
After that we arrived in the Kingston, we got off the bus and saw the city. It was so beautiful, then we went to The lake for lunch, after that we got on a big ship for a cruise. The weather was very good and we saw many different sized islands. It took us one hour and we enjoyed it.
Finally, we came back. I had had a good experience.